- My Narrative does recreate some events that occured in my life, but I could add more detail to it.
- It does go in sequence from begining to end, and from the first thing that happened to the last thing that happened. I just don't have specific dates or times, I just have the years.
- I show in some parts and tell in some parts, but it is set at a specific time I don't if it's set a specific place though since theres so many differnet places in the story.
- Instead of saying what someone told me I should add more dialogue and make it more interesting.
- I need to be more specific about the people and places that I'm at.
- It does present conflicts and tensions, but I sort of tell about them instead of showing them.
- I do change from the event and the conflict in the story is a self to self type of conflict.
- The event is very relavent in my life today and it will be just as relavent in the future.
- I still need to add more detail to it so that the reader can feel what I'm saying, I also need to add a voice to it because it seems all monotoned.
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